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It took me several hours and im still not satisfied....
But, if you really wanna catch the mood of this work, you've to listen to this: [link]
For this contest: [link]
"Sensing this pine is as deep as the deepest chasm,
'Tis and hath e'er been merry blood to pest -
Hither! - cede and fulfil my phantasm!
To be adust for time longer can I not bide,
Cherish me and sonorously do me laud -
Hence the heart hale out thro' the chest!
For dread! - thine eyes will behold a guise faugh'd."
Misery thee?! - Rather misery me! -
For in Time's durance am I naught but wee."
"This tender and loving pest I to thee bequeath,
Thence switly wilt thou errant to 'Neath."
"And to me should'st thou be the humblemost knave,
Lest fear! - spit I on thy cist and grave! -
Lest leer I at thee and do bewitch,
And the tharms fluttering claw'd and eldritch."
"To conquer thee and thy blood for glore
Art thou my afeard and reluctant whore;
Irksomely coy, save wiliéd by alarum,
Bear this torture and maim with decorum.
Credits:
But, if you really wanna catch the mood of this work, you've to listen to this: [link]
For this contest: [link]
"Sensing this pine is as deep as the deepest chasm,
'Tis and hath e'er been merry blood to pest -
Hither! - cede and fulfil my phantasm!
To be adust for time longer can I not bide,
Cherish me and sonorously do me laud -
Hence the heart hale out thro' the chest!
For dread! - thine eyes will behold a guise faugh'd."
Misery thee?! - Rather misery me! -
For in Time's durance am I naught but wee."
"This tender and loving pest I to thee bequeath,
Thence switly wilt thou errant to 'Neath."
"And to me should'st thou be the humblemost knave,
Lest fear! - spit I on thy cist and grave! -
Lest leer I at thee and do bewitch,
And the tharms fluttering claw'd and eldritch."
"To conquer thee and thy blood for glore
Art thou my afeard and reluctant whore;
Irksomely coy, save wiliéd by alarum,
Bear this torture and maim with decorum.
Credits:
Image size
2912x4368px 4.89 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D
Shutter Speed
1/10 second
Aperture
F/7.1
Focal Length
24 mm
ISO Speed
1000
Date Taken
Sep 23, 2008, 12:52:38 PM
Sensor Size
23mm
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This is a beautiful and stunning piece! It is a wonderful composition: the shapes, poses, and especially the skillful use of light and dark tones capture the eye and lead it around the picture space. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap"/> The choice of color and the limited palette is lovely. I love the wisps coming up from the spirit being and how his arms reach around to encircle her.
The only crit I have is her hair. On the right side (her left), you can tell that you added to it with a brush because there are several locks that appear identical. I would recommend working on her hair more, building up from a slightly darker base with the brightest strands on top, using a variety of brushes (=Falln-Stock and ~trisste-brushes have some good ones).
Overall, very well done and beautiful work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>